diff --git a/story_artifacts/the-fortune-below/book-two-existing-material-audit-13-chapters.md b/story_artifacts/the-fortune-below/book-two-existing-material-audit-13-chapters.md index 8f802a5..b664ad5 100644 --- a/story_artifacts/the-fortune-below/book-two-existing-material-audit-13-chapters.md +++ b/story_artifacts/the-fortune-below/book-two-existing-material-audit-13-chapters.md @@ -14,7 +14,9 @@ This is a reuse audit, not an approved book blueprint. It follows the current wo Author decisions recorded after the audit: -- Sabine voluntarily chooses Cerys's room and transport after the emergency purchase. +- Sabine voluntarily chooses Cerys's room and transport after the emergency purchase. An independent room + remains available, but she prefers to accept Cerys's personal hospitality rather than feel indebted to Corin + or the household, and she privately likes sharing Cerys's bed. - Corin gives all four women 50,000 crowns; the allocations are accomplished gifts, not merely proposals. - Cerys's compensation is 500 crowns plus a separate 100-crown allowance. - Cerys remains at home with her family during a one-week break after release, with no work obligation. @@ -66,7 +68,7 @@ Paths below are relative to the external Fortune Below corpus unless stated othe | Cerys first sex | `book-two/scenes/fortune-below-book-two-short-cerys-first-sex.md` | Keep | Complete free-romance payoff with humor, stopping, resumed choice, and aftercare. | | Cerys free outing | `book-two/scenes/fortune-below-book-two-cerys-girls-night-out-scene.md` | Rewrite/extract | Keep self-funded leisure and friendship. The long intercourse recap duplicates the complete scene and should be removed. | | Sabine emergency purchase | `book-two/scenes/fortune-below-book-two-short-sabine-purchase.md` | Rewrite | Strong sale deadline, Gilded Door threat, 9,600-crown purchase, Quill protection, and estate arrival. Must resolve whether Cerys compels the journey or Sabine chooses it. | -| Sabine first night | `book-two/scenes/fortune-below-book-two-sabine-cerys-bedroom-bond-experiment.md` | Keep/trim | Keep locks, food, clothing, debt questions, the deliberate bond experiment, and Sabine's cold-bath ending. Preserve the distinction between active legal ownership and Sabine's requested experiment. | +| Sabine first night | `book-two/scenes/fortune-below-book-two-sabine-cerys-bedroom-bond-experiment.md` | Keep/trim | Keep locks, food, clothing, debt questions, the deliberate bond experiment, and Sabine's cold-bath ending. Sabine has an independent room available but chooses Cerys's bed to avoid feeling indebted to Corin or the house and because she likes sleeping beside Cerys. | | Sabine release | `book-two/scenes/fortune-below-book-two-short-sabine-release.md` | Keep/rewrite | Strong prompt release, document ownership, money, and transport. Reframe the week as Cerys asking Sabine to give the estate a fair try, while preserving Sabine's right to leave immediately or stay indefinitely. | | Sabine departure and return | `book-two/scenes/fortune-below-book-two-sabine-cerys-first-night-free.md` | Split/rewrite | Keep unsupervised departure, inspected alternatives, chosen return, and visible release papers. Remove the later private erotic material from mainline. | | Sabine employment | `book-two/scenes/fortune-below-book-two-sabine-shopping-with-corin-scene.md` | Shared crossover | Keep the employment transition and cute relational opening. Use one controlled text in both Book Two and the side novel so the two copies cannot drift. | @@ -101,7 +103,9 @@ asks Sabine to try the estate for one week, but Sabine may leave sooner or remai The completed purchase draft controls: Sabine voluntarily chooses Cerys's room and transport. Remove later claims that Cerys compelled the journey. The purchase itself remains coercive because Cerys temporarily owns -the claim, but Sabine's lodging and transportation are chosen. +the claim, but Sabine's lodging and transportation are chosen. The estate offers Sabine an independent room; +she chooses Cerys's bed because accepting Cerys's personal hospitality feels less like owing Corin or the +household, and because she enjoys sharing a bed with Cerys. ### 5. Sabine's Durable Alternatives @@ -134,8 +138,8 @@ why the decisive character choice loses force when reported afterward. | 7 | **A Week Of Her Own** | Employment material from the release draft, first estate bath, bath aftermath, and the nonsexual opening of `cerys-girls-night-out-scene` | Complete Cerys's obligation-free week, then let her choose paid work at 500 crowns plus a separate 100-crown allowance. Establish bodily choice, self-funded leisure, and lived freedom before romance. | | 8 | **Check Properly** | `short-cerys-first-intimacy` plus trimmed next-morning scene | Cerys initiates the relationship as a free woman, chooses the stopping point, sleeps beside Corin, and permits limited public acknowledgment. | | 9 | **What She Asked For** | Trimmed advice scene plus `short-cerys-first-sex` | Cerys identifies her own wants and chooses the next threshold. Remove later recap duplication. End with an established free relationship. | -| 10 | **Purchased Time** | `short-sabine-purchase` plus `sabine-cerys-bedroom-bond-experiment` | Stop the sale, establish Cerys as temporary claim holder, protect transfer, and let Sabine voluntarily choose Cerys's room and transport. Keep the requested bond experiment and cold-bath ending without treating it as permission beyond that night. | -| 11 | **Seven Days** | `short-sabine-release` plus first half of `sabine-cerys-first-night-free` | Prompt release and durable alternatives. Cerys asks Sabine to give the estate one honest week for her, without making it a deadline: Sabine can leave immediately or stay indefinitely. Sabine investigates other choices and returns freely. | +| 10 | **Purchased Time** | `short-sabine-purchase` plus `sabine-cerys-bedroom-bond-experiment` | Stop the sale, establish Cerys as temporary claim holder, protect transfer, and let Sabine voluntarily choose Cerys's room and transport while an independent room remains available. Keep the requested bond experiment and cold-bath ending without treating it as permission beyond that night. | +| 11 | **Seven Days** | `short-sabine-release` plus first half of `sabine-cerys-first-night-free` | Prompt release and durable alternatives. Cerys asks Sabine to give the estate one honest week for her, without making it a deadline: Sabine can leave immediately or stay indefinitely. Sabine investigates other choices and returns freely, then keeps choosing Cerys's bed because she wants the company rather than because the house requires it. | | 12 | **Shopping With Corin** | Full controlled crossover scene, first-bath autonomy, and `short-ending-choices` | Sabine negotiates the provisioning role, accepts paid authority, and demonstrates one consequential purchasing decision. The same scene opens the side novel. | | 13 | **Doors Open Both Ways** | Mostly new; folded-route plans and household aftermath | Keep the dungeon off-page and the explanation simple. Selka reports that the route can reopen under her conditions and retains her maps. Close on Cerys and Sabine remaining by choice, with one unexplained public hint that the side story continues. |